Five tips for keeping your readers gripped

Julia Crouch is a former theatre director and playwright who has carved out a successful place for her novels in the genre of Domestic Noir – a term she herself coined. Julia will be bringing her expertise to Noirwich Crime Writing Festival in September to deliver a workshop on the essentials of writing a gripping plot. Below, she provides five important tips for keeping readers on the edge of their seat.

Viewpoint is your friend

Stories can be told from the point of view of many different characters, each with their own take on the events. Choose who is doing your telling very carefully, work with their voices, character, secrets and lies, reliability or lack thereof, and the spaces between different points of view. You can weave a wonderfully rich pattern this way. This doesn’t mean that you have to write in the first person (‘I’) – you can get right up close inside a character’s head by using third (‘she’). A cool, detached, narrator can be helpful, too, but you have to be clear who and what they are, and why they are there.

Hold back

Your reader doesn’t need to know everything, all at once. In fact, very often, the less you can tell them the better. Just give them what they need to know for your story at that particular time.

Structure is important

There is a reason that screenwriting gurus bang on about the three-act structure – setup, confrontation and resolution – and that’s because it works. If you have any storytelling bones in you at all, you will more than likely, even subconsciously, end up with a structure like this. But it’s helpful to bear it in mind and, whether you structure beforehand (as a plotter), or after (as a pantser), run your plot through that mill.

Time is not a fixed continuum

Not in novels, nor in quantum physics, but I’ll just deal with the novel bit here. Back story doesn’t have to just sit in the past. While it is being read, it is the present of your story world, as much as the current day scenes are. The reason it is there, though, is to provide causality – to show why things are happening in your present, and that is the engine of any plot. You can start with the back story, end with the back story, distribute it evenly throughout your narrative. Just put it in the place that serves you best.

Twists

For any crime novel – and, to a greater or lesser extent, for any novel of any genre – it is most important that the reader doesn’t see what’s coming or work the resolution out too early. Holding back, as in point 2, above, helps. But twists that arise out of the narrative are most useful, and even expected in certain sub-genres (and I’d include my own, Domestic Noir, in this). A twist has to earn its existence, though. It can’t rely on red herrings, or outright lying by you, the novelist (although unreliable narrators, handled carefully, are permissible). If the reader goes away feeling cheated, you’ve lost.

Julia Crouch is the author of four Domestic Noir novels: Cuckoo, Every Vow You Break, Tarnished and The Long Fall. Her fifth, Her Husband’s Lover, is out in January 2017.


The Essentials of Plot – Crime Writing Workshop with Julia Crouch

Friday 16 Sept, 11am-1pm or 2pm-4pm, WCN Dragon Hall, £45 / £40 conc / combined package £80

Uncover the secrets of constructing gripping, tightly-wrought fiction with successful novelist and Domestic Noir expert Julia Crouch, author of Cuckoo, Every Vow You Break, and Tarnished. Julia will share top tips for tackling character arcs, cliff-hangers, plot twists and riveting narrators, providing guidance on how to turn your research into a successful crime story that will keep your readers on tenterhooks. Places restricted to 14 to ensure a tailored experience. Book your place

Keeping it in the Family: Domestic Suspense

Saturday 16 Sept, 12noon, WCN Dragon Hall, £8 / £6 conc

Three shining stars of the genre peel back the veneer of domestic bliss to reveal the dangerous underbelly of families, relationships and home lives. Domestic Noir, a term coined by Julia Crouch, has never been more popular. What makes it such a popular choice for female writers today?

Part of an all-day celebration of crime fiction with six author panels. Food and drink served by The Feed, Hushwing Café and 42 King Street all day. Buy tickets

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